Dillon's writing and Andriena's writing

Dillon's reading response was interesting and clear. This was one of the books i wanted to read this summer.Dillon had a good amount of description with his work. You could tell that he really took his time to write this response and it wasn't short. I really enjoyed reading his reading response.

Andriena's reading a on "Before we were free" by Julia Alvarez. Andriena's writing was  a really long stretch of words. It was also really descriptive like Dillon's. I like how she didn't miss any detail or it seemed like it. It was very interesting.